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Hatchling

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Sep 02, 2010 22:00 | #1

I'm wondering how the exposure and wb looks and whether things are over processed. Any suggestions on how to improve are welcome.

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http://farm5.static.flickr.com …4952567077_d474e56140.jpg

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http://farm5.static.flickr.com …4953153790_c402828da4.jpg

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http://farm5.static.flickr.com …47130_d30eafe34f.jpg[/URL

Hopefully those linked correctly.... I couldn't get the actual image to embed.

Thanks!

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PureShadowed

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Sep 03, 2010 02:07 | #2

I like the shots, but I think the pictures would've been better shot at eye level.

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Sep 03, 2010 17:15 | #3

PureShadowed wrote in post #10841779

I like the shots, but I think the pictures would've been better shot at eye level.

Good point. I was having trouble with my reflection in the glasses

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lawrence_evil

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Sep 03, 2010 23:12 | #4

I'm not really a pro so I could be way off, but it looks like you have two different temperature lights.

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John the Geek

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Sep 04, 2010 22:12 as a reply to @ lawrence_evil's post | #5

I like the top one best. The third one doesn't load for me.

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