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Sep 03, 2010 12:47 |  #1

Hi everyone , im new here , and i just bout a rebel T1i about a month ago and im rly into taking pictures and i hope to learn this through and through.

i need an opinion on this picture here

IMAGE: http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4152/4946779605_3ed87b599e_b.jpg

also , if anyone could give a comment on how im doing so far by checking out my flickr page (link in my signature)
and give some comments on that , it would be great

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Sep 03, 2010 21:06 |  #2
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that's an interesting image. what are those two round circles sitting in front of the trees?




  
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Sep 03, 2010 21:21 |  #3

jetcode wrote in post #10846642 (external link)
that's an interesting image. what are those two round circles sitting in front of the trees?

lenseflare :confused::oops:


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Sep 04, 2010 02:07 |  #4

magnuz wrote in post #10846710 (external link)
lenseflare :confused::oops:

hahahhahahah I lol'd.

What ARE those two things anyways?


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Sep 04, 2010 10:19 |  #5

This is a dramatic image. I like the point of view. It conveys an impression of large size. The color of the clouds is a nice contrast.

However, I have the vague sense that it's not quite level. The picnic bench, park bench, and circular thing clutter up the background. I would crop them out or try to remove them with a slight change in camera position.


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Sep 04, 2010 11:31 |  #6

joedlh wrote in post #10849070 (external link)
This is a dramatic image. I like the point of view. It conveys an impression of large size. The color of the clouds is a nice contrast.

However, I have the vague sense that it's not quite level. The picnic bench, park bench, and circular thing clutter up the background. I would crop them out or try to remove them with a slight change in camera position.

yeah , i spent quite some time trying to figure out the best way to level the picture. and this was the closest i got to a level photo.

yeah ill crop it and see how it turns out , thx for the tip !


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Sep 07, 2010 21:59 as a reply to  @ magnuz's post |  #7

IMAGE NOT FOUND
HTTP response: NOT FOUND | MIME changed to 'image/gif' | Redirected to error image by FLICKR


well i tried fixing the photo using your advice and here is the result ! :D

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Sep 07, 2010 22:45 as a reply to  @ magnuz's post |  #8

YMMV, but here's my take.

The original had a better feel to it with the monoliths placements, but as stated above the benches and that tree clutter up the background and distract from the image.

The problem with the crop is that it's now a center centric composition and as is is fairly static and boring.

The second issue that I have is the hilights - the ground around the blocks is way too bright and the green (grass?) behind on the lower left is distracting and detracts from the overall composition. This can probably be helped with some adjustments to the exposure with some burning

Composition-wise I think rule of thirds placement would help if you had the space.David duChemin (external link) has a nice article on placement that might help.

Your flickr has some nice images in it.




  
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Sep 08, 2010 07:20 as a reply to  @ cmchavis's post |  #9

alright , ill check it out , thx man ;)


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