jonsegal Senior Member  295 posts Likes: 1 Joined Jun 2010 More info | Sep 05, 2010 00:16 | #1
IMG_5652  by jon segal, on Flickr
IMG_5647 by jon segal, on Flickr
IMG_5662 by jon segal, on Flickrhttp://www.flickr.com/photos/7378908@N08/
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Sep 05, 2010 18:01 | #2 |
joedlh Cream of the Crop  5,515 posts Gallery: 52 photos Likes: 688 Joined Dec 2007 Location: Long Island, NY, N. America, Sol III, Orion Spur, Milky Way, Local Group, Virgo Cluster, Laniakea. More info | The first one got a chuckle from me. It's a nice humorous shot. In the second, it looks like the camera locked on the subject's shoulder for the focus, which put her face out of focus. Did you let your camera choose the focal point? Experiment with picking it yourself. You might be pleasantly surprised. In the third one, you have an interesting light display in the background that draws the eye. I think it would have been a more powerful shot if your subject was turned to face toward it. That would have had her looking into the center of the frame instead of out the edge, which is a better composition. Joe
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corkneyfonz Goldmember  2,477 posts Likes: 5 Joined Oct 2009 Location: United Kingdom More info | Sep 05, 2010 20:58 | #4 I quite like them, the only slight irritation for me is that awb colour cast which is very obvious in the first.
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Sep 06, 2010 23:14 | #5 joedlh wrote in post #10855622 The first one got a chuckle from me. It's a nice humorous shot. In the second, it looks like the camera locked on the subject's shoulder for the focus, which put her face out of focus. Did you let your camera choose the focal point? Experiment with picking it yourself. You might be pleasantly surprised. In the third one, you have an interesting light display in the background that draws the eye. I think it would have been a more powerful shot if your subject was turned to face toward it. That would have had her looking into the center of the frame instead of out the edge, which is a better composition. I have the focus in the center of the frame. I aim the center at what I want it focus, lock it, then move to frame the shot. http://www.flickr.com/photos/7378908@N08/
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