Hey, yep, another India shot, bit of cc appreciated...
crackennz Senior Member 374 posts Joined Aug 2006 Location: wellington nz More info | Sep 05, 2010 04:08 | #1 |
joedlh Cream of the Crop 5,515 posts Gallery: 52 photos Likes: 688 Joined Dec 2007 Location: Long Island, NY, N. America, Sol III, Orion Spur, Milky Way, Local Group, Virgo Cluster, Laniakea. More info | Sep 05, 2010 18:56 | #2 Yikes! I'm still trying to get all that yellow out of my eyes. I think it kills the image. I would try desaturating it and bringing the brightness down. Joe
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KwasiFocus Member 41 posts Joined Sep 2010 Location: New York City More info | Sep 05, 2010 21:55 | #3 (I'm certainly not a professional) I'm not really picking anything up from your subjects' expression. Since the background doesn't seem important I think it would have been good if you had possibly stepper back or made him smile or frown or something. "Amateurs practice until they get it right, but professionals study and practice until they never get it wrong"
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Titus213 Cream of the Crop More info | Sep 06, 2010 00:51 | #4 The yellow is too high a contrast to the dark side of his face. It could be fixed with lots of work. I also tried cropping it to a portrait format and got rid of all the yellow on the right. Dave
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Sep 06, 2010 02:06 | #5 So I guess that's a resounding no to the yellow then haha....it was actually like that on the day with the sun streaming right in on it but now that you mention it!!! I see what you mean..
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Sep 06, 2010 02:20 | #7 although overcooked the de-sat a touch...oh well
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andrewjadephoto Member 114 posts Joined Sep 2009 Location: Phoenix, AZ More info | Sep 06, 2010 11:41 | #8 Crackenz did a great redo but it's still missing an artisitc edge, IMO. I would take the blue hue out of the shot completely and then add a layer of texture. ~Andrew
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Sep 11, 2010 06:54 | #9 Didn't even see that blue hue till you mentioned it...damn it!!! Now it's got my eye....texture is a good idea, ta!
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corkneyfonz Goldmember 2,477 posts Likes: 5 Joined Oct 2009 Location: United Kingdom More info | Sep 11, 2010 09:03 | #10 Indians are not shy when it comes to vivid colours. Therefore assuming that this hasn't had the sliders maxed out, I'd leave it in as otherwise it could have been taken in your back yard.
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