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WPG

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Aug 18, 2005 15:18 | #1

in my new studio.

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here is the link to it on my site.
http://gregwilker.com ….php?g=portraitsmandw&s=2

I've been mostly landscapes and still art. trying to get into portraits with the start of my studio.

this shot was mostly a fly by quick shot. "hey dad let me take a picture of ya." kinda thing.

anyways would like some feed back on it.

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Ray Marrero

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Aug 19, 2005 14:52 | #2

I'd like to see you look at the camera and smile.

Ray
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LastLine

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Aug 19, 2005 15:09 | #3

I'm not sure that's entirely necessary, but the head looks at a funny angle to the body, somehow I'd feel more comfortable seeing the body tilted slightly towards the direction the head's pointing.

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freddycr

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Aug 19, 2005 15:26 | #4

Light is good , sharpness is good, composition is too"square" for my taste.
Subject too central.

Regards

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JMHPhotography

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Aug 19, 2005 20:45 | #5

Ok the subject and pose were covered by others, so I'll speak of the lighting and technicals...

I really like how you have your setup. Your subject is evenly lit and well lit. I can't tell where any of your lights are and you have managed to do a good job seperating your subject from the background. Good job. I can't wait to get my new studio set up.

~John

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