The Dang's

Constructive criticism is appreciated

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very nice! Love the family looking at the city.

Nice set overall. IMHO #4 is the best of the bunch. You caught a great moment and the subjects look properly exposed with great colors and bokeh in the background. The kid's pose in #5 is great, too.

Consider fixing the horizons in 2 & 3 and trying to brighten up the subjects a bit. It might be more difficult in 2 without blowing out the sky, though.

thanks guys for the informative comments

In the last image she is a bit too dark.. Assuming you're using your flash off camera here? Aim the light more toward her or even past her.. Then the light will spread more evenly across all.

photographicd wrote in post #10926372
In the last image she is a bit too dark.. Assuming you're using your flash off camera here? Aim the light more toward her or even past her.. Then the light will spread more evenly across all.

thanks! i used an umbrella, do you think that would work