First time e-session - L & M

First time having a go at this....
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I like your poses but it seems your focus is soft, and the white balance in some of the color ones seems off. Nice expressions captured!

The content of the photos is great! They look really happy together. I agree with the above post, though. Also, the center of each photo seems much brighter than the rest of the shot and it washes out the subjects in a few of them.

Nice, but the hand in the #7 is very distracting

Decent set although I think the vignetting is a bit over the top for my taste. A little can go a long way. I should know, I had the same issue haha

I do like to vignette... Maybe to much. Just love the "look" in b&w. To old school I guess.

I can see what you are seeing in two. Not sure it is WB. I think it is more of the red blanket bouncing in his face. I will play with it.

Thanks for the comments.

not sure how to change it in the first pose, but the extra chin isn't overly flattering

i think it's a combination of WB and the red reflection... as the WB is also off in the other color one.