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Sep 08, 2010 15:07 |  #1

Another serie with my treasure

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Sep 08, 2010 16:42 |  #2

That one photo is huge! Resize!

I am sorry, I think she is adorable, but your photos( all of them that you have posted of her) fall flat for me.its either the focus, the composition mostly, and the lighting...

I would spend some time reading about exposure, lighting etc....it will get you on the track you need to be?


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Sep 08, 2010 16:46 |  #3

I like picture #2..The rest seem to be stretched out or probably cropped too much(idk). Practice and read all the threads you can handle on POTN and you'll get better results.


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Sep 08, 2010 20:13 |  #4

Cute child but the weird camera angles are not very complimentary.


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Sep 08, 2010 20:19 |  #5

Flo wrote in post #10873669 (external link)
That one photo is huge! Resize!

I am sorry, I think she is adorable, but your photos( all of them that you have posted of her) fall flat for me.its either the focus, the composition mostly, and the lighting...

I would spend some time reading about exposure, lighting etc....it will get you on the track you need to be?

+1 on everything. A for effort :)


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Sep 09, 2010 00:50 as a reply to  @ ni$mo350's post |  #6

heys guys Thanks for your advices.. i am actually reading about exposure and about crop proportions...rules of thirds, etc etc etc

Sorry for posting pictures so big...hope to improve my skills so your Critics be better next time ;)

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