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Just another street shot :)

 
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Sep 12, 2010 18:12 |  #1

Just thought id post one of my street shots. CC welcomed. Thanks for viewing, Al


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Sep 12, 2010 18:24 |  #2
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cool and unfortunate all in the same breath ...




  
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Sep 12, 2010 20:05 |  #3

Not enough detail for me, maybe the post processing though.


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Sep 12, 2010 20:58 as a reply to  @ IanBMW's post |  #4

Lots of halos around the figures and objects - I take it you wanted to emphasize elements in the composition that you think are important.

The idea is good and so are choices, but keep working on the execution (e.g. brightness and contrast of pizza box is a little too abrupt). There are lots of possibilities here, one of which might be a high contrast B+W with lots of grain and grittiness.



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Sep 12, 2010 21:01 |  #5

The pp work seems a little off which rather distracts the attention that you are trying to draw to this poor creature's plight.


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Sep 12, 2010 21:03 |  #6

Seems pixilated/poor lighting and wall behind poor guy is distracting.




  
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Sep 13, 2010 05:34 |  #7

My eyes get drawn to the pizza box. Which means I miss out of the impact you are trying to make.
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Sep 13, 2010 16:06 |  #8

i like the photo but may have been shot a little soft? i dont know what the halo's are from, maybe over sharpening, i think the photo lacks contrast


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Sep 13, 2010 17:39 |  #9

I agree with you guys. It was a photo i shot a loooong time ago which i wanted to play around with in Lightroom and ruined it. Thanks for the CC


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