headshot

first attempt at a headshot.. let me know how i did

Looks pretty sharp and in focus. My only nit pic would be is, her left side of the chin and cheek seem to be hard to distinguish the shape. Kind of like her neck and the outline of her face are hard to see just in that spot. The rest is nice.

Well lit (apart from what Allscape says) and the B&W is nice. She does not look particularlly comfortable though.

TheLaird wrote in post #10898730
Well lit (apart from what Allscape says) and the B&W is nice. She does not look particularlly comfortable though.

Can you really see the outline of her cheek/chin area against her neck? (her left side) That is all I am addressing Laird, Nothing else. I never said that it was not well lit.

Please don't put words in my mouth or try to read between the lines.

TheLaird wrote in post #10898730
She does not look particularlly comfortable though.

I was thinking the same thing, pose seems ackward and uncomfortable. But still a very nice shot! I would be happy with it!

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Allscape wrote in post #10899914
Can you really see the outline of her cheek/chin area against her neck? (her left side) That is all I am addressing Laird, Nothing else. I never said that it was not well lit.

Please don't put words in my mouth or try to read between the lines.

i think he means that the photo is well lit, except for the parts that you stated were confusing.


and to everyone else, i believe i have a photo of her smiling, maybe that would have been the better choice.

thank you all for your critique

deuce818 wrote in post #10900988
i think he means that the photo is well lit, except for the parts that you stated were confusing.

That is what I meant. I should have written it more clearly and sorry if I have caused confusion or offence, as neither was my intention.