Agnes

My first shoot with a model. These were shot a couple of months ago but I never had a chance to post them here. Any C&C's appreciated.

Lens used. Canon 135 and 35.

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no pics

Really? hmmm...Anyone else not seeing the pics?

No pics here as well.

Wow. Are they red X's? Weird.

I see nothing....no red x or anything.

eye2i wrote in post #10908874
Wow. Are they red X's?

Yep.

very good composition

I think they need a little more contrast. Just saying....

maybe a little bit overboard on the opacity.

vivala1210 wrote in post #10910025
very good composition

Thanks! My first try, I thought the shots and poses were pretty simple.

farelyk301 wrote in post #10910045
I think they need a little more contrast. Just saying....

Really? maybe I can push them up a bit in lightroom, but I'm afraid the image may look darker (I was going for pretty much a more natural approach on these shots). I think pictures 1 & 2 were SOOC with a little softening on image 1 because it came out too sharp. thanks though.

Mr. Bill wrote in post #10910058
maybe a little bit overboard on the opacity.

Care to explain which image? I thought the opacity looked fine.

Image 1, 2 & 5 are winners!!! Love the colors and her facial expression on image # 1, 3 & 4. Looks so natural. the last one couldve been a money shot but it was a bit OOF. great job!

eye2i wrote in post #10910247
Thanks! My first try, I thought the shots and poses were pretty simple.


Really? maybe I can push them up a bit in lightroom, but I'm afraid the image may look darker (I was going for pretty much a more natural approach on these shots). I think pictures 1 & 2 were SOOC with a little softening on image 1 because it came out too sharp. thanks though.

Care to explain which image? I thought the opacity looked fine.

I can't see anything. I sort of think these guys are just joking with you

kraaazymike wrote in post #10910354
I can't see anything. I sort of think these guys are just joking with you

Yup that's what it is....I am looking at a nothing!

I dont know what to say or do, some see it some dont hahaha. Ill go ahead delete those and start all over again, hope that works...