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Sep 15, 2010 08:34 |  #1

My son went through a phase just recently where he was growling like a pirate (Arrrrrrgh!) at everyone he saw. It was very cute and gave me the idea to do a series of shots to remember this.
These are the two of the ones I like best. I know I have a LOT to learn about photography and these could be better. I'd love some honest C&C about how to accomplish that. Thanks!

Photo 1
Canon Rebel - kit lens 18-55.
Shutter Speed 1/125
Exposure Program. Aperture Priority.
F Stop: 6.3
ISO: 200
Focal Length: 44

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Canon Rebel - kit lens 18-55.
Shutter Speed 1/100
Exposure Program. Aperture Priority.
F Stop: 5
ISO: 200
Focal Length: 25


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Sep 15, 2010 08:46 |  #2

1st one looks good maybe slightly OOF, but could be the up load

second there is hand blur,....you needed a faster shutter speed




  
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Sep 15, 2010 08:47 |  #3

I like the first one




  
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Sep 15, 2010 09:56 |  #4

Love the expression in the one sitting on the trunk.

The other one, you have him looking out the edge of the frame. Better to have him looking into the middle.

The white shirt was probably not an ideal choice. Together with the dark trunk, you appear to have exceeded the dynamic range of your sensor.


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Sep 15, 2010 09:56 |  #5

joedlh wrote in post #10913586 (external link)
Love the expression in the one sitting on the trunk.

The other one, you have him looking out the edge of the frame. Better to have him looking into the middle.

The white shirt was probably not an ideal choice, as together with the dark trunk, you appear to have exceeded the dynamic range of your sensor.

AGree about the second, it could not be more pirate! But the lighting was not your best friend in these..a little more shade...


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Sep 15, 2010 12:33 |  #6

#2 with a sharp set of hands would be worth a pirate's treasure !!


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Sep 15, 2010 15:35 as a reply to  @ TheLaird's post |  #7

Too bad he didn't have a bottle of rum in hand in the second shot...Yo, ho, ho. His expression would go perfect with it!


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Sep 15, 2010 15:39 |  #8

I think these are great. I couldn't help but think how they might look with some background separation...


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Sep 15, 2010 18:24 |  #9

will227457 wrote in post #10913176 (external link)
1st one looks good maybe slightly OOF, but could be the up load

second there is hand blur,....you needed a faster shutter speed

Thank you for feedback! I'll watch shutter speed next shoot, as it's hard to direct this age to not move so much :)

rioni wrote in post #10913178 (external link)
I like the first one

Thanks! I printed that one for my wall. :)

joedlh wrote in post #10913586 (external link)
Love the expression in the one sitting on the trunk.

The other one, you have him looking out the edge of the frame. Better to have him looking into the middle.

The white shirt was probably not an ideal choice. Together with the dark trunk, you appear to have exceeded the dynamic range of your sensor.

Thanks for the advice and info, I'll keep it in mind for future shoots.

Flo wrote in post #10913592 (external link)
AGree about the second, it could not be more pirate! But the lighting was not your best friend in these..a little more shade...

I may have messed up the lighting a bit in PP too...thanks for the feedback!

TheLaird wrote in post #10914516 (external link)
#2 with a sharp set of hands would be worth a pirate's treasure !!

Yes, I love the expression on this one, and was disappointed that the hands blurred, faster shutter speed next time I guess. Thanks for the reply.

navydoc wrote in post #10915668 (external link)
Too bad he didn't have a bottle of rum in hand in the second shot...Yo, ho, ho. His expression would go perfect with it!

Hah! Thanks for the feedback.

Adam Jones wrote in post #10915695 (external link)
I think these are great. I couldn't help but think how they might look with some background separation...

Thank you, my next personal assignment is to try and learn how to get that background separation, I know I have to work with my Fstop, but I haven't got it to do as I want yet. Thanks for the feedback.




  
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Sep 15, 2010 18:37 |  #10

LOL @ NavyDoc's edit!

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Thank you, my next personal assignment is to try and learn how to get that background separation, I know I have to work with my Fstop, but I haven't got it to do as I want yet. Thanks for the feedback.

You'll find heaps of resources about the subject, but basically: the smaller the f-stop number (which means the larger the aperture), the more background separation you'll have. Other factors play large roles as well, such as the subject's distance from the background, your distance from subject, etc.

Here's one of the first tutorials I read about the subject (it already feels like so long ago...): http://www.cambridgein​colour.com/tutorials/d​epth-of-field.htm (external link)


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Sep 15, 2010 19:56 |  #11

Adam Jones wrote in post #10916679 (external link)
LOL @ NavyDoc's edit!

You'll find heaps of resources about the subject, but basically: the smaller the f-stop number (which means the larger the aperture), the more background separation you'll have. Other factors play large roles as well, such as the subject's distance from the background, your distance from subject, etc.

Here's one of the first tutorials I read about the subject (it already feels like so long ago...): http://www.cambridgein​colour.com/tutorials/d​epth-of-field.htm (external link)

Wow! Thank you so much. I had a vague understanding of how this works, but not enough to enact properly. That tutorial is great!




  
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Dec 04, 2010 09:50 |  #12

What an adorable baby! That expression is priceless. I love that you didn't stick socks on him, but chose to let those corn niblet toes show. I loved seeing that red PEI clay, as I grew up on the island (Borden-Carleton) and started my photo education there.

To help you to understand the aperature number thing: the numbers on the aperature ring are fractions. an f stop of 16 is 1/16th of an inch. If you saw how tiny the aperature opens up at that f stop, it would be 1/16th of an inch. Very small, so you'd better have a slow shutter speed, given that the hole isn't very big. It takes a longer time for the right amount of light to drift in there if the hole is going to be so small. Hence, small hole, longer time.

On the other end of the ring, you will have, let's say, 1.2. That would roughly translate into more than half an inch, and if you saw the aperature opening that is present at 1/2, you can see that is very wide open, and would let in a LOT of light being so big, so you'd better not let that shutter stay open very long or you'll overexpose. Wide hole, short time. wide aperature, faster shutter speed.

When I first started out in photography, and being math impaired, I had a problem with aperature numbers like 16 being "smaller" than "2". It was confusing to me. Then someone said, "Those are fractions. Divide up a chocolate bar into 16 pieces and eat one of those 16 pieces. 1/16th. Then divide another of the same bar into 2 pieces and eat one of those 2 pieces. 1/2. Which was bigger?" I had to be taught as if I were a two year old, but the lightbulb when on and it made all the difference in going on to understand aperatures.

I look forward to seeing some of your island shots. I go there every year to shoot, usually in the spring. Stanley Bridge and New London, Cavendish is always on my list, trying to find something other than the fishing boats, but the island is so incredibly beautiful. Hope to see some scenery shots from you soon!


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Dec 04, 2010 11:26 |  #13

the second one is really cute (not that the first one's not). his face seems the slightest bit out of focus, but maybe he was just moving. I might crop the second one a bit on the left (and top if need be).




  
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