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PABLOROM12
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Sep 16, 2010 12:25 |  #1

Hi Guys.. just trying to get better...Hope you like..if not better so i can improve my skills...thankss ;)

IMAGE: http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/4110/leyre1.jpg


IMAGE: http://img833.imageshack.us/img833/1982/leyre2.jpg



  
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Sep 18, 2010 08:06 |  #2

Cute kid
For me the first picture is too close. Also the hair over her eyes are a distraction. And her eyes are very black.
I think the exposure is better in the second shot, but the framing needs work. She is too far to the right, with empty space to the left, and the finger is actually a distraction for me. It just seems to float there.
Just my 2 cents worth, so take it with a grain of salt :-)


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Sep 20, 2010 10:22 as a reply to  @ pelooyen's post |  #3

HEY Pelooyen...

If everybody gives 2 cents i would be rich jejeje ;) so your critics are really wellcome.

You are right, the hair in her eyes is a little bit distracting, and her eyes are a little dark.

I´ll try to post some updates as soon as i have time...

Unfortunately i am not ablle to keep her 3 seconds without moving jajaja pure energy...


thanks for your critics ;)

take care and good shots




  
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