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Sep 17, 2010 13:57 |  #1

First time posting a photo. Been lurking long enough and thought I should share. This was taken of my favorites subjects while they were riding their Barbie Power Wheels Jeep.

Shot with my 350D and 50mm 1.8

IMAGE: http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4148/4998678867_49558d135a_z.jpg

Aside from clipping off the top of my daughters head, is there anything else I could improve upon next time? Any PP that could be done? I did some slight adjustments to levels, contrast, and saturation in Aperture.

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Sep 18, 2010 08:00 |  #2

Its a lovely shot - nice and vibrant. Expression is great.
Apart from clipping her head, I wold suggest that she to too central. Think rule of thirds.
The other child adds something but its too far to the left,and the back of the car ends up being a distraction.


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Sep 18, 2010 16:21 as a reply to  @ pelooyen's post |  #3

Thanks! Yes, I agree, the composition could've been better. Probably zoomed out a bit would've revealed more of the car, and given a bit more context to the scene, and not been a distraction.


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