Sep 18, 2010 15:26 | #1 After watching this tread and learning so much over the past several months I know that my feeble attempt at a first wedding pales in comparison to what is offered here on a regular basis. But I know that I won't improve unless I offer up for your critique and suggestions these attempts. So please go ahead and suggest away how these shots can be improved.  2.  3.  4.  5.  6.  7. 
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_aravena isn't this answer a stickie yet?  12,458 posts Likes: 12 Joined Feb 2007 Location: Back in the 757 More info | Sep 19, 2010 14:34 | #2 Not bad for your first time. You got some good poses which is where many fail at. The last one look like you were tired of PP and just didn't...same with 4. I'm not sure I like the kissing one. When I first scanned passed it I liked and thought it was cool but looking at it, it's kinda weird. Still, way better than some I see as first timers or even old timers. I would say you should continue on the path, get some more practice and do it. Last Shot Photography
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nicksan Man I Like to Fart  24,738 posts Likes: 53 Joined Oct 2006 Location: NYC More info | Sep 19, 2010 15:51 | #3 Here's my take:
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mrmarklin Senior Member 608 posts Likes: 89 Joined Aug 2006 Location: People's Republik of Kalifornia More info | Sep 19, 2010 18:59 | #4 In general I think you compare well to what normally appears here. Canon EOS 5D also Mk III, 24-70L, 85 IIL, 24-105L, 70-200 f/2.8 IS L, 180 Macro L, 100 f/2.8L IS Macro, 100-400 L IS, 8-15 L Fisheye f/4, 16-35 L, 50 L , TS-E 24 L, 600 L, Extender 1.4X & 2X II, Speedlite 580EX x 2, MT-24EX Macro Twin Lite, ST-E2, Angle Finder C, RS-80N3 Remote Switch, Focusing Screen EE-D, BG-E4, Manfrotto 458B Neotec tripodw/Acratech 1155 GP Ballhead.
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mrmarklin Senior Member 608 posts Likes: 89 Joined Aug 2006 Location: People's Republik of Kalifornia More info | Sep 19, 2010 19:01 | #5 You have some great lenses and a good camera. You need to learn to use DOF as a friend. Canon EOS 5D also Mk III, 24-70L, 85 IIL, 24-105L, 70-200 f/2.8 IS L, 180 Macro L, 100 f/2.8L IS Macro, 100-400 L IS, 8-15 L Fisheye f/4, 16-35 L, 50 L , TS-E 24 L, 600 L, Extender 1.4X & 2X II, Speedlite 580EX x 2, MT-24EX Macro Twin Lite, ST-E2, Angle Finder C, RS-80N3 Remote Switch, Focusing Screen EE-D, BG-E4, Manfrotto 458B Neotec tripodw/Acratech 1155 GP Ballhead.
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Thanks for the CC and encouragement. I would agree with everything said to this point (though I'm not sure I hold up well against much of what I see here, I know that I have a long way to go). I'm working on using OC Flash now because I realize that even in outdoor situations it is going to be necessary. I also know that I have to get my PP up to speed, I'm trying to move beyond the basics and really get comfortable with a work flow that is consistent.
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