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Sep 21, 2010 00:31 |  #1

Just wanting some critique on these photos i took today :)

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Sep 21, 2010 12:21 |  #2

They're all quite nice, I think I like the third one the most though.

Might be worth doing some PP to make the images abit more varied in tones. The first one especially feels abit too much of the same and needs breaking up abit.




  
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Sep 21, 2010 12:56 |  #3

Nice shots. I think you have the mechanics down now lets work on composition.




  
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Sep 21, 2010 13:02 as a reply to  @ Yusef's post |  #4

I think these are beautifully done, and the composition for me is not bad at all?


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Sep 21, 2010 13:21 |  #5

As far as composition there's a lot of distracting foliage in all of the shots. The third shot does not seem level, the water almost seems to want to flow upwards in that shot.




  
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Sep 21, 2010 14:24 as a reply to  @ Yusef's post |  #6

I agree, maybe the first one could use a crop, but it is a stream,.river.lol.ther​e will be "distracting" foliage :)


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Sep 21, 2010 20:31 |  #7

First gets my vote, whilst I like the composition in the last one, the stream has lost definition.


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