C&C wanted - HS senior album cover

So I'm can't decide if I like this or not, just needed some honest C&C. I shot my cousin's senior pics and was going to give her an album for her graduation gift.

Thanks for looking!

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Interesting idea. However the text colours seem to merge with the red lettering being difficult over the artwork to easily decipher.

Yeah I agree, it all seems to work accept for the typography. Try using a simple black font somewhere to match but not detract from the photo...

I think I'll try erasing the dark parts of the design and see if that helps the font stand out ...

I think that her actual school colors are Royal blue and gold so I think I'll try the "class of" in gold and the 2011 in a brighter blue.

Thanks so much for the feed back!!!