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Sep 23, 2010 23:00 |  #1

Went out to the countryside this week to visit my in-laws and took a few pics. Only had my camera 1 week and want some honest serious criticism - I'm a big boy and can take it so please don't hold anything back.


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Sep 24, 2010 01:23 |  #2

Hi again.
1st shot. Composition is good and well-focused. It is rather contrasty, though. The sky is a bit overexposed and the sunflower florets have lost shadow detail. It would be hard to get both exposed properly without introducing some light back into the flower - like a fill flash or a reflector. If you have the likes of Adobe Photoshop you could fix this up anyway.

2nd shot would be a good composition but for it being generally out of focus and the background containing distracting tonal elements.
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Sep 24, 2010 01:37 |  #3

Once again thanks for the feedback. Never would have thought about using flash in full daylight, but will remember that for next time.


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Sep 24, 2010 13:05 |  #4

Createsean wrote in post #10968401 (external link)
Once again thanks for the feedback. Never would have thought about using flash in full daylight, but will remember that for next time.

I was at a photography class one time and the instructor made the comment that when he sees a photographer using a flash in daylight, he automatically assumes they are somewhat knowledgeable about photography.

What's funny is that people that don't understand photography see the same photographer using a flash during the day and they think "look at that idiot, he's using a flash in bright daylight."

Photography is all about capturing light. The thing about daylight is that, while there is usually plenty of light, it is usually not shining how and where you want it. You need to somehow control the light to make your pictures how you want them. In daylight, you can either alter the light that is there with a reflector or you can add light where you want, using a flash or strobe. The underside of the sunflower is in a shadow, so it's not receiving enough light, which is making it underexposed.


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