Meet Candice, my first Senior Shoot

Hey all! Looking for some feedback here on these.
Lighting was 47" Octa, late evening, 10-15mph winds....

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The blur makes me feel like I'm drunk.

too soft..

that last shot would be really good if it wasn't as blurry

thanks all......I was wondering if I over did the softness or not.....She seems to love it and described this type of look based on some other portraits I did. Ohh well..guess it's not for everyone!

Its really blurry and soft... overdone a bit?

I think #1 is great, not just another snap that's for sure. That lighting lets the softness work imho. Pretty girl and I bet she is very happy with your work.

soft....shiny....soft. 1 and 3 would be winners if it weren't for being too soft.

Thank you all. I will play with these on my own time and adjust the softness of these....She was trying for a semi romantic feel.....I tried!

Maybe a washed out effect wouldve looked better?

Knockout05 wrote in post #10979033
Maybe a washed out effect wouldve looked better?

do you have an example of this...or how to...sounds like it might go.

cute photos but way too processed

Hey, if the client is happy and got what she want, then the shoot was a success.
As an experiment, post the original of a few and let us take a shot at them.
We'll give you an idea of OUR idea of the proper softening.
If you want.

thank you for the offer ootsk....uploads coming soon....gimmie a few minutes!

Here are a few originals....thanks for everyone's help and perspective.
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