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Sep 27, 2010 18:37 |  #1

New at portraits and on-site strobes (one AB800 and a bounce umbrella in this case). I realize the shadow on her arm sucks but could not figure out a better crop. What do you guys think?

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Sep 27, 2010 18:55 |  #2

Maybe it's just me, but her face looks washed out, either from PP or from the light. There is no texture in her skin.
Maybe lower the light a bit and set a reflector on the right off the camera to get rid of the shadow on the right?

P.S. Beautiful girl. Love her smile. :)


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Sep 27, 2010 19:39 |  #3

Aleness wrote in post #10989622 (external link)
Maybe it's just me, but her face looks washed out, either from PP or from the light. There is no texture in her skin.
Maybe lower the light a bit and set a reflector on the right off the camera to get rid of the shadow on the right?

P.S. Beautiful girl. Love her smile. :)

Did a decent amount of softening in post...maybe a little too much...I'll try and tone it back a bit maybe.

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