POST YOUR FASHION - EDITORIAL PICTURES HERE!!

Hotrodguru wrote in post #12144085
Thanks to Smashtic for linking me to this thread. We need a Fashion | Editorial section please.

Some recent stuff and a lot on my blog - www.jaymarroquin.com/b​log

2. Designer Paola Hernandez

This would've been better if the model didn't have her arm in front of her. The sense of motion is there but I feel if the arm was behind it would've been expressed better. Also it would've showed off the outfits. Watch out for little details like that. DOn't be afraid to retake.

@reconcadre
Veeeery nice image!

^^^ thanks IVOlution

btw..do you like the mustang or the model?

Here's my contribution:

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ReconCadre wrote in post #12150169
^^^ thanks IVOlution

btw..do you like the mustang or the model?

Hahhahahaha!!! Dude. I just couldn't decide!!! hahahah
The best combo ever!

JoJo2fast wrote in post #12111999
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Amanda by jordanvoth.com, on Flickr

As I first looked at this, my first impression was "the face is not focused" but then I realized that the focus IS on the shoe. I assume that was the intent, but I wonder if there is something that would make the viewer's eyes go directly, or at least more quickly to the shoe.

Sorry i don't have any suggestions - I suppose I am only asking you and the others who post here if there are techniques that could change the viewing flow a bit.

I wanted to take advantage of the natural light, but the weather was kinda crappy and I had to improvise. Any thoughts on this are much appreciated.

More about the shots on flickr.
Thank you.

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@DeigoV the first 2 are great.. the second one is the best and is book worthy..

but on the last 2 i have an issue. your pictures are there its just the models.. i get a sence of that they are awkward ,not the same intensity that a real couple would be. almost like an awkward prom photo.

next time push your models past there comfort zone. tell them to get close like they really would to thier own bf or gf

Motofreak429 wrote in post #12155450
@DeigoV the first 2 are great.. the second one is the best and is book worthy..

but on the last 2 i have an issue. your pictures are there its just the models.. i get a sence of that they are awkward ,not the same intensity that a real couple would be. almost like an awkward prom photo.

next time push your models past there comfort zone. tell them to get close like they really would to thier own bf or gf

Thank you
I also prefer the first 2 . Model direction is definitely one of my weakest points... your advice is much appreciated and I'll keep that in mind next time. Thank you very much

DiegoV wrote in post #12156631
Thank you
I also prefer the first 2 . Model direction is definitely one of my weakest points... your advice is much appreciated and I'll keep that in mind next time. Thank you very much

ya its definatly hard cause you want to keep everybody happy. but models are there for shots as well as you are. as long as everything stays professional they will do much of everything you tell them. just have a vision and go for it

vegasbryc wrote in post #12144903

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Brian, I love everything here: the mood, posing and PP! Beautiful work!

Kp

klpham71 wrote in post #12192015
Brian, I love everything here: the mood, posing and PP! Beautiful work!

Kp

thank you