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Oct 01, 2010 06:37 |  #1

Please tell me if there is an improvement on my work and how can I improve it more. I'm just beginning and enjoy doing this.

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Since majority thinks its the contrast, I reduceed the contrast, please do tell if its enough
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Oct 01, 2010 07:42 |  #2

Both are abit too contrasty to my eyes. What program are you using for pp? what is the source image? jpg/raw?




  
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Oct 01, 2010 08:01 as a reply to  @ rioni's post |  #3

the 2nd looks sharper then the rest.


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Oct 01, 2010 10:11 |  #4

rioni wrote in post #11013550 (external link)
Both are abit too contrasty to my eyes. What program are you using for pp? what is the source image? jpg/raw?

I'm using cs3. Img is jpg. Thanks for your response!


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Oct 01, 2010 20:41 |  #5

Nice edit but just getting a little too harsh in terms of contrast.


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Oct 01, 2010 23:24 |  #6

Contrast too high and WB is off (blue tint). I like the shot, has a serenity feel to it.


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