First try at a wedding

moved to the wedding threads...

sorry

I hope I can be honest here.

First, I think it's cool you were able to gain some experience by taking some shots as a guest. Experience is always good.

I think the slideshow needs to be faster. It is painfully slow and there needs to be a way to somehow click through the slides instead of forcing the viewers to have to wait the pre-determined amount of time.

The pictures themselves are just okay to me. If you were going for the candid, second-shooter type pictures I think you did a good job. There are only a few that stand out to me (one being in the church) but many were the types of pictures I'd expect a relative to take. They just seemed like snapshots, not photographs.

Technically, they look good. Color, sharpness, exposure seemed to be good on all of them.

Artistically, I think they fell short.

Just my opinion, take it as you will.

Points taken. As mentioned this was definitely as a "second shooter" or "step-out-of-the-way" thing.

Thanks