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Oct 02, 2010 21:09 |  #1

So after reading more, seeing more pics and shooting more have a few for CC...sorry for the low res


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Oct 03, 2010 09:01 |  #2

very nice expression in #1, the white spots in the background are distracting.
#2 doesn't do much for me. green thumbs? I suspect all of her nails are colors that way so it would have been nice to have all her fingers in the picture to give some color


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Oct 03, 2010 09:09 |  #3

paper dress is cool...lighting on model's face in fist photo not bad but low lighting in second not very flattering...read up on short lighting.


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Oct 03, 2010 09:19 as a reply to  @ Denis Seguin's post |  #4

In the first one, the green leaf in the foreground on the right keeps pulling my eye in towards it. Watch the models positioning or clone it out in post.


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Oct 03, 2010 09:41 |  #5

Like the model, expression and pose in first but the whole background is a bit distracting to me. If trees are a wanted background element for the paper dress maybe increase the distance between trees and model creating more bokeh in the background.

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Oct 03, 2010 11:31 |  #6

seaside wrote in post #11024760 (external link)
If trees are a wanted background element for the paper dress maybe increase the distance between trees and model creating more bokeh in the background.

I agree. That one branch she's holding onto, makes it look like somethings growing out of her head. Besides that and the leaf, I like it :)


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Oct 03, 2010 11:46 |  #7

Like always you guys rock thanks




  
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