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Oct 03, 2010 04:08 |  #1

CC please.


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Oct 03, 2010 04:42 |  #2

I think you've missed focus on the eyes


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Oct 03, 2010 04:55 |  #3

Hmmm it might be off a little, however, the PS filter I have used adds a blur to the picture. Low res on the upload also.


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Oct 03, 2010 04:59 |  #4

Photo looks very soft. If that's what you were going for, then you've got it, but in my opinion it doesn't look right. I notice a lack of fine detail in the eyes, headband and hair and it bugs me.




  
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Oct 03, 2010 05:02 |  #5

Hehe I didn't dress the models, meant to be vintage. More like 80's fashion...

Yeah I have added the softness to it, I will upload the high res images to Flickr as they look a lot better.


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Oct 03, 2010 05:40 |  #6

How about this one? Seems clearer on my screen;)


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Oct 03, 2010 19:53 |  #7

the 2nd shot is much better than the 1st. i like how the mismatching colors draw attention to the subject and creates a nice contrast. also the slight shadow cast on the left side of her face is nice. i like it.


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