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Oct 03, 2010 20:04 |  #1

hello all! have a middle school girls volleyball team/individiual shoot this week...i took some sample shots of my niece with the uniform the volleyball teams will be using...let me know what you think and how i can improve poses, lighting, sharpness, etc....go easy please! thanks!


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Oct 03, 2010 20:07 |  #2

the shadow of the net on the backdrop is a little distracting. try bringing the net and the model further away from the back.

the crop is a little weird. maybe bring the net up higher as well. the bottom is usually at chest height.


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Oct 03, 2010 20:15 as a reply to  @ AmandaMarie's post |  #3

Mandy, thanks for your tips! I do see the shadow from the net and will distance the backdrop from the net a little more....as far as the height of the net, I understand it should be higher but thought the net might look weird above her head and take away from her face being the main focal point....




  
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Oct 03, 2010 20:25 |  #4

I don't like crops at the joints (knee).


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Oct 04, 2010 12:25 as a reply to  @ PhotoGeek's post |  #5

any suggestions on how i can make this pic sharper? i shot this at iso 125, f. 8...thanks




  
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