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Oct 04, 2010 15:39 |  #1

so, 580 off camera w/ diffuser. At the park....anything I can do to make it better?

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Oct 04, 2010 15:49 |  #2

Try and remove the bluish tint, even the top of her hair is blue.


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Oct 04, 2010 17:16 |  #3

I'M jealous, I'd love to have such a great lens myself :(

+1 WB is off. I would boost the contract a bit and bring those nice eyes out! Maybe also rule of thirds?

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Oct 04, 2010 18:32 |  #4

Fabulous photo, I can't quite grasp the unusual colour casts but your child looks adorable.


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Oct 04, 2010 19:24 |  #5

nüborn wrote in post #11033614 (external link)
I'M jealous, I'd love to have such a great lens myself :(

+1 WB is off. I would boost the contract a bit and bring those nice eyes out! Maybe also rule of thirds?

Nice edit - OP, very cute kid!


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Oct 04, 2010 19:31 |  #6

Agreed, wb looks a little off but nice photo otherwise.


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Oct 04, 2010 20:31 |  #7

wb may be off I did PP on my uncalibrated monitor at work and it looked a little warm to me so I backed off on the WB....maybe to much Ill check it later at home




  
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Oct 05, 2010 01:24 |  #8

curious--how are you diffusing ?



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Oct 05, 2010 01:39 |  #9

crappy little snap on diffuser like this

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Oct 05, 2010 01:55 |  #10

any better?

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Oct 05, 2010 07:06 |  #11

will227457 wrote in post #11036260 (external link)
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Definitely better, although the color is still a tad off (maybe just a tiny bit too much green?).


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Oct 05, 2010 10:32 |  #12

Here is with the green adjusted out.

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Oct 05, 2010 10:39 |  #13

andrew76021 wrote in post #11038081 (external link)
Here is with the green adjusted out.

This one looks very natural to me (on my work monitor - YMMV).


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Oct 05, 2010 11:03 |  #14

that last version looks nice. I also like how she is not in the centre of the shot.


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