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Oct 06, 2010 02:58 |  #1

A shot of some scalloped potatoes au gratin - used my 28-105 lens and on board flash. Thoughts and recommendations for future food shots welcome.


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Oct 06, 2010 03:00 |  #2

More Light = Better Exposure = Deeper DOF


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Oct 06, 2010 03:31 |  #3

I agree with the previous poster. Underexposed by at least one stop. From the EXIF I see that you had very little light and used a shutter speed of 1/8 sec. That may have introduced some camera shake blur as well. DOF is too shallow - not surprisingly with the close up and 95mm focal length and F/4.5 aperture.......that gives tou just about 10 mm (1/16") You need to get further away and a smaller aperture. Then up the ISO if you cannot change the amount of light.

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Oct 06, 2010 03:33 |  #4

Thanks guys, will check out vk2gwk's food photography


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Oct 06, 2010 03:38 |  #5

Thought I had turned on the on camera flash. - yes my kitchen/dining room is not as well lit as I would like and I won't be able to afford an extra flash for the foreseeable future - will see what I can do to improve lighting.


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Oct 06, 2010 03:41 |  #6

Put it near a window and use a piece of white foamcore to bounce some light back into the scene...

One thing you'll notice about most food photography where the food is shown as "moist" .. It's usually done with more light from behind than in front so you get a good sheen! ;)


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Oct 06, 2010 03:43 |  #7

flyingPhotog - will head to the store for some foamcore tomorrow - thanks for explaining everything as well.


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Oct 06, 2010 11:59 |  #8
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Just a heads up so you won't be disappointed if your food shots don't match the magazines.

I read that the typical food shoot involves cooks who are continually creating the meal being shot as under the lights most food is not fresh after 10 minutes of shooting. Heavy duty lighting and set design and PP work to get the color and look that sells what they most often can't deliver (when did the last burger you eat look like the photo?).

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Oct 07, 2010 06:03 |  #9

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thanks for the tips, most food porn that I shoot is stuff I, or my wife, cooks as well as any restaurants that we go to.


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Oct 07, 2010 09:30 |  #10

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Oct 07, 2010 11:30 |  #11

In addition to the exposure problems, you need to be thinking about composition. Also, the food has to look appealing before you photograph it before it will look good in a photo. That looks like it was instant potatoes still in the black microwaveable bowl that it came in.


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Oct 07, 2010 16:17 |  #12

drumnut01 wrote in post #11052268 (external link)
In addition to the exposure problems, you need to be thinking about composition. Also, the food has to look appealing before you photograph it before it will look good in a photo. That looks like it was instant potatoes still in the black microwaveable bowl that it came in.

Ouch - never cooked instant food in my life.


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Oct 07, 2010 17:33 |  #13

remember food photography is all about the food, looking good to eat, and the presentation of the food on the plate and or table. the above comment about using natural light and reflectors is a great idea. check out some of the food channel pictures and pictures with recipes.


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Oct 07, 2010 20:21 |  #14

Too close, poor lighting and does not look appetizing.




  
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Oct 07, 2010 21:57 |  #15

Plate the food on a nice plate and use a nice setting...as stated you were too tight on just the food. Another tip that will help it look fresh is to brush the food with olive oil just before taking the shot.


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