A shot of some scalloped potatoes au gratin - used my 28-105 lens and on board flash. Thoughts and recommendations for future food shots welcome.
Createsean Senior Member 994 posts Likes: 1 Joined Sep 2010 Location: Toronto More info | Oct 06, 2010 02:58 | #1 A shot of some scalloped potatoes au gratin - used my 28-105 lens and on board flash. Thoughts and recommendations for future food shots welcome. I'm looking for harsh criticism of my photos - tell me how to improve, I will be grateful.
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FlyingPhotog Cream of the "Prop" 57,560 posts Likes: 178 Joined May 2007 Location: Probably Chasing Aircraft More info | Oct 06, 2010 03:00 | #2 More Light = Better Exposure = Deeper DOF Jay
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vk2gwk Cream of the Crop 13,360 posts Gallery: 332 photos Likes: 1836 Joined Jun 2009 Location: One Mile Beach, NSW 2316, Australia More info | Oct 06, 2010 03:31 | #3 I agree with the previous poster. Underexposed by at least one stop. From the EXIF I see that you had very little light and used a shutter speed of 1/8 sec. That may have introduced some camera shake blur as well. DOF is too shallow - not surprisingly with the close up and 95mm focal length and F/4.5 aperture.......that gives tou just about 10 mm (1/16") You need to get further away and a smaller aperture. Then up the ISO if you cannot change the amount of light. My name is Henk. and I believe "It is all in the eye of the beholder....."
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Oct 06, 2010 03:33 | #4 Thanks guys, will check out vk2gwk's food photography I'm looking for harsh criticism of my photos - tell me how to improve, I will be grateful.
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Oct 06, 2010 03:38 | #5 Thought I had turned on the on camera flash. - yes my kitchen/dining room is not as well lit as I would like and I won't be able to afford an extra flash for the foreseeable future - will see what I can do to improve lighting. I'm looking for harsh criticism of my photos - tell me how to improve, I will be grateful.
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FlyingPhotog Cream of the "Prop" 57,560 posts Likes: 178 Joined May 2007 Location: Probably Chasing Aircraft More info | Oct 06, 2010 03:41 | #6 Put it near a window and use a piece of white foamcore to bounce some light back into the scene... Jay
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Oct 06, 2010 03:43 | #7 flyingPhotog - will head to the store for some foamcore tomorrow - thanks for explaining everything as well. I'm looking for harsh criticism of my photos - tell me how to improve, I will be grateful.
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jetcode Cream of the Crop 6,235 posts Likes: 1 Joined Jul 2009 Location: West Marin More info | Oct 06, 2010 11:59 | #8 PermanentlyJust a heads up so you won't be disappointed if your food shots don't match the magazines.
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Oct 07, 2010 06:03 | #9 Jetcode, I'm looking for harsh criticism of my photos - tell me how to improve, I will be grateful.
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PhotosGuy Cream of the Crop, R.I.P. More info | Oct 07, 2010 09:30 | #10 FrankC - 20D, RAW, Manual everything...
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drumnut01 Senior Member 415 posts Likes: 1 Joined Jul 2009 More info | Oct 07, 2010 11:30 | #11 In addition to the exposure problems, you need to be thinking about composition. Also, the food has to look appealing before you photograph it before it will look good in a photo. That looks like it was instant potatoes still in the black microwaveable bowl that it came in.
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Oct 07, 2010 16:17 | #12 drumnut01 wrote in post #11052268 In addition to the exposure problems, you need to be thinking about composition. Also, the food has to look appealing before you photograph it before it will look good in a photo. That looks like it was instant potatoes still in the black microwaveable bowl that it came in. Ouch - never cooked instant food in my life. I'm looking for harsh criticism of my photos - tell me how to improve, I will be grateful.
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SteveWintrow Member 187 posts Joined Sep 2005 Location: TN More info | Oct 07, 2010 17:33 | #13 remember food photography is all about the food, looking good to eat, and the presentation of the food on the plate and or table. the above comment about using natural light and reflectors is a great idea. check out some of the food channel pictures and pictures with recipes. 5DII, 1D Mark IIn, Canon 24-105 L, Canon 28-70 2.8L, Canon 70-200 2.8L IS, Canon 100-400L
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Oct 07, 2010 20:21 | #14 Too close, poor lighting and does not look appetizing.
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droberts Senior Member 261 posts Likes: 10 Joined Aug 2008 Location: Missouri More info | Oct 07, 2010 21:57 | #15 Plate the food on a nice plate and use a nice setting...as stated you were too tight on just the food. Another tip that will help it look fresh is to brush the food with olive oil just before taking the shot. Canon Stuff...
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