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Oct 08, 2010 19:43 |  #1

Trying a few new with dof and pp, critique welcome.

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Oct 09, 2010 01:58 |  #2

Lovely subject and the composition is nice especially on #1 and 2. The biggest issue, to me, is the lack of DoF - #2 is spoiled by it. If the subject is the hood ornament I'd at want at least the first half of the ornament in the field of focus.




  
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Oct 09, 2010 06:46 |  #3

ya, I was shooting with my new sigma 30 and went abit nuts with f1.4. Lessons learned :)




  
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Oct 09, 2010 07:57 as a reply to  @ rioni's post |  #4

I love the colors and agree you may have overdone it at f1.4. #3 needs to be straightened as it is leaning to the right. Besides that, they look good.


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Oct 09, 2010 08:31 |  #5

Good looking out... straightened #3 and replaced #4 with another that should work better.




  
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