You seemed to have nailed the focus on this however i think some light color correction is needed. That and the bleeding Cowboy needs to bleed to death lol, over done imo. Shooting infront of Palm Leaves can make for a busy and distracting background, just somethings i have learned in shooting. Maybe it will help, maybe not lol. other than those things,great Job.

But then I looked around and saw it on like 5 or so photog's business cards and I felt dirty after that 

