After a few bad shoots, here I am... CC please

Hi everyone

I would love of CC on these pictures.

Some of you may have seen the up and down images I have bee posting. Please check this one out.

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They look nice, but they're very small, so it's really hard to tell.

Nice, but maybe the top ones could've used a bit of fill flash? As stsva said, they're a bit small.

You got back lighting in a few of them. Try changing the subject position with respect to the sun. Or use fill flash or reflector. The one in the middle on the top is... what? The largest one of the two girls looks like it's a touch out of focus. Hard to tell with the size that you posted. Nice expression on the taller girl. Eye contact with the short one would have benefited the image. In the middle one on the bottom, you committed one of the most common mistakes of casual photographers: failing to get down to the child's level. You cut off the top of the head in a few. This bothers some people (me).

That for the input everyone.

Just a few points:

1. The images are a little small, not sure how to post them before. They all look bright and clear on my screen
2. I was using a reflector, the larger images show this.
3. I didn't ask the girls to do anything, just run around and have fun
4. Trust me I did get down on their 'level', I trashed a bloody good pair of jeans haha Soooo not happy.
5. Check out our facebook page for the bigger images: http://www.facebook.co​m …otography/15505​1411193663

Thanks again

Also with the photo middle bottom, if you look at the photo a little longer you will see something hiding in the water near her feet