peterboroughphotography Member 81 posts Joined May 2010 Location: Peterborough near Stamford UK More info | Oct 13, 2010 15:51 | #1 |
bbvdm Goldmember 1,081 posts Joined Dec 2007 Location: Kenmore, NY More info | Oct 13, 2010 15:56 | #2 That's one HUGE image! It probably is in need of some serious cropping (not just because it's large). Canon 5D MkII gripped, Canon 7D gripped, Canon 40D gripped, Canon XTI (IR) gripped, Canon 17-55 2.8 IS, Canon 60 Macro 2.8, Canon 70-200L 2.8 IS , Canon 24-105 4.0, Tokina 11-16 2.8, Canon 50mm 1.8, Sekonic L-358, Canon Speedlite 580-EX II, (2)430-EX, Pocket Wizards, lots of other stuff that seems to keep growing...
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bbvdm Goldmember 1,081 posts Joined Dec 2007 Location: Kenmore, NY More info | Oct 13, 2010 15:57 | #3 bbvdm wrote in post #11090783 That's one HUGE image! It probably is in need of some serious cropping (not just because it's large). I guess you reloaded a smaller image... Canon 5D MkII gripped, Canon 7D gripped, Canon 40D gripped, Canon XTI (IR) gripped, Canon 17-55 2.8 IS, Canon 60 Macro 2.8, Canon 70-200L 2.8 IS , Canon 24-105 4.0, Tokina 11-16 2.8, Canon 50mm 1.8, Sekonic L-358, Canon Speedlite 580-EX II, (2)430-EX, Pocket Wizards, lots of other stuff that seems to keep growing...
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collierportraits Goldmember 1,896 posts Likes: 3 Joined Mar 2008 Location: Virginia Beach, USA More info | Oct 13, 2010 16:25 | #4 Great idea and good lighting. Lack of feeling, though. More like "Stop there while I take your picture!" Would love to see more emotion / movement / feeling. 5D3 | 16-35L | 45 TS-E | 50L | 85L | 100L | 135L | 24-70L | 70-200 II L | 580s | Zero, TT & Crumplers | and an X100!
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nicksan Man I Like to Fart 24,738 posts Likes: 53 Joined Oct 2006 Location: NYC More info | Oct 13, 2010 16:37 | #5 Where's the traffic?
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Svetlana Goldmember 3,357 posts Likes: 11 Joined May 2008 Location: Calgary, AB More info | Oct 13, 2010 16:39 | #6 I agree about the lack of expression...wish for a more shallow DOF to focus on the couple and maybe them kissing or him dipping her or her walking and looking back at him, just something other than "Stand and smile"... Canon 7D, 5Dmk2, 70-200mm f/2.8L II IS, Canon 50 1.2L, 35 1.4L, 85 1.8, Canon 16-35L, Canon 100 2.8L IS Macro, Speedlight 580EX II x 2, 430 EX, enthusiasm.
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FredEricNorris Senior Member 406 posts Joined Jul 2009 Location: O-H-I-O More info | Oct 13, 2010 18:18 | #7 I would agree that a more shallow depth of field, some fill flash and a lower perspective would be good for this image. Try to get a more even keeled perspective.. everyone stands straight upright and points down or straight at the subject, try to change the perspective by getting down on one knee but not so far that you are shooting up their noses.. combine this with a shallow DOF and you will have this image with a much better composition
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ejicon Goldmember 1,920 posts Likes: 6 Joined Dec 2006 Location: Hollywood, California More info | Oct 13, 2010 18:56 | #8 Too many logo/name watermarks. Maybe make them smaller or place them elsewhere. 5D & 30D| Canon 16-35ii f/2.8 L USM| Canon EF 50mm f/1.4 USM | Canon 70-200mm f/2.8L USM | Canon EF 100 f/ 2.8 Macro USM
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Oct 13, 2010 22:13 | #9 I think the concept is great, the idea is perfect!
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peterboroughphotography THREAD STARTER Member 81 posts Joined May 2010 Location: Peterborough near Stamford UK More info | Oct 14, 2010 13:11 | #10 all the traffic was behind me, I was stood in the middle of the road, so had very little time to grab the shot, as the horns started blasting http://www.peterboroughphotography.com - Wedding Photography and Event Photographer
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nicksan Man I Like to Fart 24,738 posts Likes: 53 Joined Oct 2006 Location: NYC More info | Oct 14, 2010 13:48 | #11 peterboroughphotography wrote in post #11096606 all the traffic was behind me, I was stood in the middle of the road, so had very little time to grab the shot, as the horns started blasting ![]() I thought that only happened in NYC.
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ca7696 Senior Member 679 posts Joined Apr 2005 Location: New Jersey, USA More info | Oct 21, 2010 18:51 | #12 nice shot a little busy but I guess thats the idea
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InnerSong Member 215 posts Likes: 4 Joined Jun 2009 Location: Left Coast More info | Oct 23, 2010 02:49 | #13 shoot at 2.8 and drop / crop that out... too much in the distraction zones of the photo. http://yourinnersong.com
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