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Oct 15, 2010 01:13 | #1

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yeah not the most interesting shots in the world, but any c&c on composition or anything would help. i don't have photoshop by the way so this is the best i can do as far as editing goes haha.

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Oct 15, 2010 01:35 | #2

#! very nice composition and loved the effect
#2 like the colors
#3 i loved the leading lines may be if you could center the road in the middle and lower the view a bit to have the horizon of the road at 1/3rd of the frame it will be nice
#4 try applying rule of the third on the head of the dog, by moving the fame a bit to the right of ur view having the dog face in the left and looking to the right will be nice, and i love the warm feeling that this photo gives me
very nice begining...

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Oct 15, 2010 04:00 | #3

^^ thanks for the feedback! i'll think about that the next time i go shooting!

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