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Oct 16, 2010 06:38 |  #1

Below are two images of a Blue Heron in near a waterfall. Please share your comments and criticisms. I am debating whether I should enter either of these into a nature competition. Thanks in advance.


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Oct 16, 2010 11:22 |  #2

I like the second one the best. I'll bet the first pic would look great with a slower shutter speed, 1/2 sec or slower. the waterfall would have blurred to a nice soft background, making the heron stand out better.


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Oct 16, 2010 11:51 |  #3

Both nice shots. I like the first because the setting is more dramatic. However a tighter crop might improve it. You don't need as much of the foreground in my opinion.


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Oct 16, 2010 13:57 |  #4

Both are great captures except that the first has an optical illusion of the area at above the wing joint being transparent.


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Oct 16, 2010 14:06 as a reply to  @ corkneyfonz's post |  #5

I'd go with the second (image where the heron appears larger). However, I think you need to bring the exposure of the heron up a bit...the bird looks somewhat underexposed. It would have been better if you had managed to capture the bird in its "fishing" position...it wouldn't have been as static.


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Oct 16, 2010 14:18 |  #6

I really like them both - nice work




  
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Oct 16, 2010 14:21 |  #7
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I wish you had some real light to work with ...




  
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Oct 16, 2010 23:39 |  #8

Nice captures - I like the separation you've achieved.

I'm not sure the slower shutter would work on #1 unless you could get the heron to cooperate and stand real still - which they often do.

The only thing I would like to see is more of the 'blue' part of the blue heron.


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