Portrait I took of my girlfriend yesterday.
Not too sure about the cropping if it is too tight. I'm new to portraiture as I like to spend my time photographing landscapes.
Any C&C would be appreciated.
C.Michael Senior Member 754 posts Likes: 2 Joined Jul 2010 Location: Adelaide, South Australia More info | Oct 17, 2010 06:44 | #1 Portrait I took of my girlfriend yesterday. www.christophermorrison.com.au
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capri_stylee Member 220 posts Joined Oct 2010 Location: Belfast, Ireland More info | Oct 17, 2010 08:26 | #2 looks spot on imo, could maybe use some space left of frame, but thats nit picking
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Flo Gimmie Some Lovin 44,987 posts Likes: 16 Joined Jul 2007 Location: Nanaimo,B.C. More info | Face looks soft for me.....but I like the composition. you're a great friend, but if Zombies chase us, I am tripping you.
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howzitboy Goldmember 2,948 posts Joined May 2007 Location: Hawaii More info | Oct 17, 2010 12:46 | #4 id knock a bit off the top and add a bit to the left. pretty girl too! http://onehourwedding.blogspot.com/
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James504 Senior Member 431 posts Likes: 3 Joined Jul 2010 More info | Oct 18, 2010 01:17 | #5 Permanent banbring it down and to the right a bit but comp looks good. Itsa bit soft, what lens did you use again?
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C.Michael THREAD STARTER Senior Member 754 posts Likes: 2 Joined Jul 2010 Location: Adelaide, South Australia More info | Oct 18, 2010 04:33 | #6 I agree on the softness. In my LR it looks very sharp, and as soon as I export it goes soft. All settings were maxxed out. www.christophermorrison.com.au
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James504 Senior Member 431 posts Likes: 3 Joined Jul 2010 More info | Oct 18, 2010 04:37 | #7 Permanent banno no i meant for future references, just watch the compositions a little more...looks good though. practice practice practice.
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C.Michael THREAD STARTER Senior Member 754 posts Likes: 2 Joined Jul 2010 Location: Adelaide, South Australia More info | Oct 18, 2010 04:47 | #8 LNJ Photography wrote in post #11117598 no no i meant for future references, just watch the compositions a little more...looks good though. practice practice practice. I figurd it was the 50.... what was your f-stop I shot wide open from memory. www.christophermorrison.com.au
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James504 Senior Member 431 posts Likes: 3 Joined Jul 2010 More info | Oct 18, 2010 04:55 | #9 Permanent banbecause you shot wide open, the 50 has sharpness issues at 1.8 next time try 2.8 instead its sharp and you still get the bokeh your looking for @ 2.8
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C.Michael THREAD STARTER Senior Member 754 posts Likes: 2 Joined Jul 2010 Location: Adelaide, South Australia More info | Oct 18, 2010 05:00 | #10 Yeah wow, huge difference. www.christophermorrison.com.au
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James504 Senior Member 431 posts Likes: 3 Joined Jul 2010 More info | Oct 18, 2010 05:03 | #11 Permanent banim not really familiar with the Tamron, but a buddy of mine has told me that canon vs. competition lenses will always own the copetition. The focusing motors will be built better and work better with the canon, there is a reason Tamron and the other lenses are cheaper. Bu that is hear say i have not experienced this for myself. No problem on the help, i know i wanted it when i was in your shoes.
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James504 Senior Member 431 posts Likes: 3 Joined Jul 2010 More info | Oct 18, 2010 05:20 | #12 Permanent banI hope you dont mind but playing with curves in PS brought up your exposure and added to the sharpness of your photo, also when its just a softness issue, last resort you can always unsharpen mask in the sharpen filter on PS........
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C.Michael THREAD STARTER Senior Member 754 posts Likes: 2 Joined Jul 2010 Location: Adelaide, South Australia More info | Oct 18, 2010 05:27 | #13 LNJ Photography wrote in post #11117682 I hope you dont mind but playing with curves in PS brought up your exposure and added to the sharpness of your photo, also when its just a softness issue, last resort you can always unsharpen mask in the sharpen filter on PS........ ![]() No don't mind at all. That looks great! www.christophermorrison.com.au
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corkneyfonz Goldmember 2,477 posts Likes: 5 Joined Oct 2009 Location: United Kingdom More info | Oct 18, 2010 11:45 | #14 The real right eye has just missed focus, although I agree that a great looking shot except for that.
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James504 Senior Member 431 posts Likes: 3 Joined Jul 2010 More info | Oct 18, 2010 14:48 | #15 Permanent banWord
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