Please C&C this shot

Nice scene but I'm sensing a tad too much red probably along the lines of a dpp landscape raw connversion.

The colours look a bit wild (over saturated) and the horizon line is a tiiiiiny bit off being level. Nothing you can't fix. It's a nice scene and worth mucking around with.

thanks for the comments I am going to work on those I'll post another version soon.

Bright colors. I think you could lose some of the lawn. This would get the horizon off center. Speaking of the horizon, I have the sense that it is slightly tilted.