What do you guys think? DOF good? Colors ok? Is the composition good?
Thanks for viewing and any comments/critiques
lonelyjew Goldmember 1,411 posts Likes: 6 Joined Mar 2008 More info | Oct 21, 2010 20:16 | #1 What do you guys think? DOF good? Colors ok? Is the composition good? Thanks for viewing and any comments/critiques Canon 40D
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Titus213 Cream of the Crop More info | Oct 21, 2010 20:57 | #2 Colors are good and the composition works - except for the oof blade of grass in the foreground. It just draws my eye to it rather than to the butterfly. Dave
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Oct 21, 2010 21:01 | #3 I think it's stunning. The florescent greens are gorgeous against the flatter orange & black of the wings. You might consider to crop a 1/8" off the top to remove the brown tips. In addition to removing a ~blemish~ that little crop may loosen the perspective of the photograph and allow the butterfly to float in space, so to speak, by removing a solid frame of reference. X100T XT3
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Oct 21, 2010 21:28 | #4 Dave, unfortunately the zoo wouldn't permit to me to "garden" to get the shot the way I like Canon 40D
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Titus213 Cream of the Crop More info | Oct 22, 2010 15:52 | #5 lonelyjew wrote in post #11142108 Dave, unfortunately the zoo wouldn't permit to me to "garden" to get the shot the way I like .Understand - the zoos do not appreciate the photographer's needs. It is a lovely image anyway. Dave
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crimsonblack Goldmember 2,052 posts Likes: 6 Joined Feb 2010 Location: Las Vegas, Nevada More info | Oct 22, 2010 23:47 | #6 I like the image as you shot it. The blades streaming across the page look excellent and the butterfly is very colorful. Nice composition and use the limited light provided. | 7D Gripped | 28-135 f/3.5-4.6 | 50 f/1.8 || --- Sony F717 digital (infrared) --- Bunch of Film Stuff:- | Nikon & Nikkormat | 50/28/70-150/400 | B & J 4x5 large format | Mamiya C220 |
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Florida_Photography Member 44 posts Joined Oct 2010 More info | Oct 23, 2010 02:46 | #7 Beautiful shot, makes me want to go out and take a few pics of the same subject. Ocala Portrait Photography
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