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Oct 23, 2010 05:43 |  #1

Not sure about this one - sort of like it, but something is not quite right. Cant figure what.

Any comments on improvements

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Oct 23, 2010 07:12 |  #2

Think it would looked better if the entire flower was in the picture


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Oct 23, 2010 16:37 |  #3

looks good to me :-)




  
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Oct 23, 2010 16:56 |  #4

Good shot....flower center in the right spot...petals sharp and background blurred....I love it.


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Oct 23, 2010 20:42 |  #5

Nice capture.


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Oct 24, 2010 11:17 as a reply to  @ corkneyfonz's post |  #6

Just me, I would crop out the extras on the right side, and seeing as you have the flower clipped already, why not a crop to even it out? 8X10?

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Oct 24, 2010 12:37 |  #7

i like it, nice colors!!


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Oct 24, 2010 15:05 |  #8

Nice shot, greatly improved by Gail's edit.


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