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Oct 23, 2010 13:17 |  #1

Please critique this portrait of my daughter. I'm particularly interested in any comments/suggestions on posing, background, composition, and lighting, Camera was XSi with kit lens. 1/80, f 5.6, ISO 400. Thanks!


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Oct 23, 2010 15:09 |  #2

overall pretty good photo with good lighting, my only thing that im gonna pick at is your cut off her hand :confused:


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Oct 23, 2010 16:31 |  #3

Looks good!




  
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Oct 24, 2010 07:42 |  #4

Thanks for the comments. Yeah, I cut off her hand! I think I have some others with all of her hand in them. On this photo, maybe it would look better if I cropped further up her arm?


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Oct 24, 2010 12:39 |  #5

nice shot and pretty girl. only thing i would have done different is maybe shoot at f4 so the background a bit softer.


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