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Oct 23, 2010 20:17 | #1

Here is a couple more of my first shoot with studio lighting of my little sis. Please Critque. You can be picky because it's the only way i'll learn

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Oct 23, 2010 22:35 | #2

Have you done any photoshop work or anything? I like how her eyes pop in the second photo, they look great to me, but I'm a newbie. I'm trying to learn what to look for.

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Oct 23, 2010 23:20 | #3

I think the light in both is very good. The eyes really pop and it is easy to "overdo" that. I think you are about at the limit....
In the second shot I probably would have given her a little bit more space to the left (without the cropped elbow).

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Oct 24, 2010 17:25 | #4

vk2gwk wrote in post #11153305

yeah probably watch out for the cropped elbow

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