reecee Hatchling 1 post Joined Oct 2010 More info | Oct 24, 2010 00:36 | #1 Any advice is greatly appreciated!  HOSTED PHOTO please log in to view hosted photos in full size.  HOSTED PHOTO please log in to view hosted photos in full size.
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whydub Member 94 posts Likes: 1 Joined Sep 2010 More info | Oct 24, 2010 00:39 | #2 The first one is very nice, but I feel like the 2nd one's graffiti really takes away from the picture. It seems to have more significance than it really should. If more of the wall was covered with graffiti, it would be more interesting I think.
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zwright Member  188 posts Joined Dec 2009 Location: WA More info | Oct 24, 2010 01:59 | #3 the wall is really distracting on the first one cause the white's so bright, the image is really contrasty in the wrong places, but i really like the style of it and the colors all work great but oof foreground is a little distracting and paired with the contrastyness it's really distracting from the subject. 40D | EF-S 18-200mm F/3.5-5.6 | EF 50 F/1.8 mkII|Tamron EF 200-400mm F/5.6 | some P.O.S. flash | Domke Ruggedwear f-3X | Photoshop CS4 Extended | Photomatix pro |
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chaotichoax Member  101 posts Joined Nov 2009 Location: New Jersey More info | Oct 24, 2010 03:10 | #4 zwright wrote in post #11153800  the wall is really distracting on the first one cause the white's so bright, the image is really contrasty in the wrong places, but i really like the style of it and the colors all work great but oof foreground is a little distracting and paired with the contrastyness it's really distracting from the subject. I agree with this...the subject looks great but the photo would really benefit from removing some color from the background and wall Flickr
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Buckieh Member  220 posts Likes: 2 Joined Feb 2010 Location: BC More info | Oct 24, 2010 04:16 | #5 In the first shot you cant clearly see the guys hair.... which he clearly put a lot of time into! Gear: 450d, 18-55mm, 17-85mm, Canon 50mm f/1.4 Tiffen 67mm CP, Dolica AX620B100 Tripod, CS4, DA camera bag
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hieu1004 Goldmember  3,579 posts Likes: 4 Joined Jul 2010 Location: Seattle More info | Oct 24, 2010 09:12 | #6 |
bpiper7 that type of outlier  More info | Oct 24, 2010 18:24 | #7 I REALLY like the first one. I would lose some of the blurred foreground ( but then it gets centered and people will gig you for that Bill
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Titus213 Cream of the Crop  More info | Oct 24, 2010 21:22 | #8 I like the first one - contrast is getting a bit high. And a bit more separation for his hair would be great. Dave
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Titus213 Cream of the Crop More info | Oct 24, 2010 21:26 | #9 bpiper7 wrote in post #11157288 ... Senior pictures is a genre I'm not familiar with. Doesn't anybody smile anymore?  One of the reason I don't do them - it seems to be fashionable to be unhappy if not downright angry. Add to that a casual dress code that borders on homeless and it's a strange genre for sure. Dave
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Oct 24, 2010 21:43 | #10 hieu1004 wrote in post #11154718 1st one is not too bad - but watch the contrast, like mentioned. 2nd one - it seems as though you mis focused - a little blurry. The girl does not match the background. Really? The girl looks pretty sharp to me. The BG is a little out of focus, but that's just fine for this.
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