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Oct 24, 2010 11:01 |  #1

Thought I'd use this building to help me learn CS5.
The first shot is the middle of a bracketed series. I then used Photomatix4 to produce and HDR. I was trying to give the sky some drama and may have over done it.
Thanks for your opinions. They help me get better at PP.


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Oct 24, 2010 11:30 |  #2

Damn good cloning!


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Oct 24, 2010 11:32 as a reply to  @ wintershredder's post |  #3

Looks great ! What a difference in the house.


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Oct 24, 2010 11:35 |  #4

thanks! One more edit. I have trrouble with blues and HDRs.


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Oct 24, 2010 14:45 |  #5

the lighting on the building is much improved...I like the first edit better

only thing I'm a little confused about is why did you move the little shrub/tree thing partially in front of the window on the left?

I also feel like that one last pole on the right should be removed since you went as far as you did

but it really does look great


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Oct 24, 2010 16:18 |  #6

awesome! nicely done..


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Oct 24, 2010 22:07 |  #7

Really like the first edit and love the cloning work.


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Oct 24, 2010 22:16 |  #8

are you sure you just learn this stuff? this looks amazing


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Oct 25, 2010 03:58 |  #9

You are a real cloning expert. Very well done to get rid of all those lampposts and signs... But the colours are a bit off I think. Looks good but not quite natural.
BTW... are you a real estate agent making this property look more interesting.... :) :)


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Oct 25, 2010 06:46 |  #10

the building looks great. the sky looks just a tad overdone, but that's my personal taste. Overall, very nice work in practicing your skills on this!


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Oct 26, 2010 06:42 |  #11

Thanks everyone!


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Oct 26, 2010 15:03 |  #12

chaotichoax wrote in post #11156247 (external link)
only thing I'm a little confused about is why did you move the little shrub/tree thing partially in front of the window on the left?

if u look closely at the before shot and the after, its a different shot. the camera was moved a bit between them.


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Oct 26, 2010 17:36 |  #13

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if u look closely at the before shot and the after, its a different shot. the camera was moved a bit between them.

Camera was on a tripod for a bracketed series of three shots using a cable release. I'm not clear on what bush is being questioned.


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Oct 26, 2010 19:11 |  #14

rw2 wrote in post #11170404 (external link)
Camera was on a tripod for a bracketed series of three shots using a cable release. I'm not clear on what bush is being questioned.

When compared there is definitely a different angle... :)


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Oct 26, 2010 19:35 |  #15

eagle eyes!


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