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Oct 26, 2010 10:42 |  #1

Final 2 pics.

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Oct 26, 2010 11:54 |  #2

if you cropped the second one, I would add a little back to the top (and maybe a bit on the right). otherwise, it looks great.




  
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Oct 26, 2010 17:44 |  #3

Both great shots, the first would stand a darker sky whilst the second could just do with a little left side hand trim.

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Oct 27, 2010 10:17 |  #4

I don't think all that green does anything for the bee and flower shot. The bee is the subject, yes? If you crop to the flower, you'd still be observing the rule of thirds with the bee. It looks like the focus is pretty sharp on the bee. That's often a challenge.

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