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Oct 26, 2010 20:12 |  #1

Hi all! I went on a hike this morning with my kids and tagged along my new to me tripod and tried my best to get a few good landscape shots. Ok i admit I had a little fun with the sliders in RAW but I am wondering if they work? What do you think? Any suggestions for future shots. Today was a rather over casted day and the sky was just more of a grey then a blue...

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Focal Length 28 mm
ISO Speed 100
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I came back because I felt like I didn't accomplish what I wanted to in the top one, so I had to try again.

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The Path Less traveled (minimal processing done on this one)
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Thank you! Please let me know what I can fix and or focus on the next time!

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Oct 26, 2010 20:16 |  #2

top one is nice, to bad you never got more lake reflection in there. bottom one seems busy.


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Oct 26, 2010 20:19 |  #3

Thanks Dave, when I came back that is when the wind started picking up. I was also hoping for that reflection... Maybe in the winter...


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Oct 26, 2010 23:27 |  #4

I like the top too, but I'd be interested to see how it looked cropped down from the top left, to cut out some of the sky, and the far left edge of the pic. (I'd say leave the two bright orange trees on the left in the pic though.

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Oct 27, 2010 05:18 |  #5

Thanks Tony :)
Is this what you mean??

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Oct 27, 2010 07:06 as a reply to  @ MommaBird80's post |  #6

A lovely landscape. Pity about the grey skies - I've had issues with those recently - but I'd get right back out there when the sky/light is a bit more appealing.

I really like #3... yes it's busy, but it's really wild and untamed looking. I prefer #1 without the crop.


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Oct 27, 2010 07:59 |  #7

The third one is stunning, but it lacks a bit of sharpness imho...

Love it though. It looks like two photos were added together to create this fantasy feeling.


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Oct 27, 2010 12:27 |  #8

My favourite is the first but it seems to have an added hue, tint of some sort. Restoring the r,g,b to the same values in curves gives better separation and contrast and 3d effect.


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Oct 27, 2010 12:58 |  #9

Here is one of the dock, a little more of the lake shown.

Corkney, I am sorry, can you explain what you mean? I am still really new at this.

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Oct 27, 2010 14:09 |  #10

I have CS3 so I can only describe my own method. Open image, then click create a new fill or adjustment layer. Select threshold and use slider to select the last bright spot, uses shift click to select a sample then move sliderfor the last bright spot anD sample using shift click. WITH BOTH SAMPLES SELECTED, PRESS CANCEL TO THE INFO BOX. Next click on new fill or adjustment layer and select CURVES. If you look at your info box, you will have 2 rgb samples. In the curves box, where it says rgb, go down for each channel. Using your samples, adjust curve by bottom and top pont so that all bottom values are 10 and all top values are 250. DO NOT PRESS OKAY UNTIL ALL INDIVIDUAL CHANNELLS ARE AT 10 AND 250

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Oct 27, 2010 16:34 |  #11

The third photo is the strongest; I'd have taken a few steps forward to get the brushes out of the frame - it subtracts from the depth and breaks the lines being drawn down the alley of trees.


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Oct 27, 2010 16:43 |  #12

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Too saturated for my tastes, and a little contrast-y, but hard to do manipulation well without the RAW!

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