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mikona
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Oct 27, 2010 23:57 |  #1

Here is a picture of some apples on my neighbor's tree.

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Oct 28, 2010 00:36 |  #2

Mikona, its a good documentary shot but not very artistic. its a centrally composed picture of some apples with an on board/hot shoe flash leading to some harsh shadows. it think you have managed the exposure well. I would consider shooting including the three, and shooting it in early morning or early evening light. thanks for sharing.


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Oct 28, 2010 14:04 |  #3

best to post the shot here so people dont have to click on a link.. but its okay but the flash is too strong.


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