My Canon 60D Commercial idea

Ok, first of all this is very badly done, I know! It is a rough draft, I am not very good at this but it's a try. Please tell me what you think of it, even if it;s badly made, thanks!
I have another phrase I can use, won't let it loose though!

I think it's pretty cool!

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I'm darn sure some here have day jobs!
Yes indeedie I am awful glad.

Are you trying to design an graphic for actual business advertising use? I think that you "cut" out text from Canon images or whatever makes it look kind of poor. Plus if you are making a real ad, did you take that picture of that camera? If not, do you have the right to use that image for business purposes?

What "freedom" does the 60D bring?

This is not for business, it's for pleasure, just some idea. Well freedom because you can do anything with it, mostly with the tilt screen, you can take pictures from different angles.

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Sony's dcs 837 had that years ago. Had a big honking lens too. Made shooting undercarriages easier from ground level (dun ask me why they wanted such), before tethered shooting came along. You undercarriage milage may vary, do to the frame work you have in focus. 8)