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Oct 30, 2010 01:55 |  #1

I think I may have taken this a bit far, but at the same time I kinda like it. What do the harsh critics think of this one?

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Oct 30, 2010 09:27 |  #2

Cool building and nice shot. However the side of the building looks a touch overexposed to my eyes/monitor.




  
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Oct 30, 2010 10:39 |  #3

I like it, just needs a very slight increase in contrast.


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Oct 30, 2010 13:16 |  #4

Thanks, I probably did blow out the building a little. I accidentally set my camera to +1 EC, so this was pulled down a bit in post.

corkneyfonz wrote in post #11193211 (external link)
I like it, just needs a very slight increase in contrast.

If only you knew how much contrast increase it has had already! :)


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Oct 30, 2010 15:10 |  #5

I like the shot overall...interesting and the sky really makes the build stand out


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Oct 30, 2010 16:12 |  #6

I agree about the building being overexposed but I really like the sky. I would crop it differently; I would leave the stairs out of the frame (the rails are distracting) and I would clone the small red thing on the left. Beautiful building.


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Oct 30, 2010 17:13 |  #7

juanpafer wrote in post #11194599 (external link)
I would crop it differently; I would leave the stairs out of the frame (the rails are distracting) and I would clone the small red thing on the left.

I like this suggestion


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