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Oct 30, 2010 12:34 |  #1

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Oct 30, 2010 13:24 |  #2

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Oct 30, 2010 14:39 |  #3

Thanks. This was a crop and tried some different PP on it.




  
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Oct 30, 2010 16:52 |  #4

Nice capture. I really like the pp.
The dog seems too centered in the frame but the crop is not easy; you should not crop the left of the picture and I don't know if there is any room on the right to include more.


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Oct 30, 2010 17:11 |  #5

I like this shot a lot


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Oct 30, 2010 20:05 |  #6

Great photo. It does seem like there should be a little more room in the direction the dog is looking, though.


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Oct 30, 2010 20:57 |  #7

Rioni, is this cropped? If so, I'd definitely bring some space to the right if you have it.

I'm trying to figure out something else I don't like about it.

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Oct 30, 2010 21:30 |  #8

Thanks for the feedback everyone. It was a pretty big crop... I didn't move it more to the right due to my reflection. Here is the original

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Oct 30, 2010 21:50 as a reply to  @ rioni's post |  #9

rioni, nice shot. Do you have software that allows you to clone? Maybe you can clone out your reflection so you put a little more space to the right of the dog.


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Oct 30, 2010 21:56 |  #10

Thanks :) yes, I do have photoshop. Do you think the crop should be wider to include the reflection (that should be cloned) or does the update work?




  
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Oct 30, 2010 22:13 |  #11

I like the new crop but I miss the frame on the left from the first one.


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Oct 30, 2010 22:30 |  #12

I tried to include that but it puts our sad friend dead center again ;)

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Oct 30, 2010 22:49 |  #13

Yeah, I think you've picked the two best options and were just nitpicking here. Even if you cloned your reflection, including more of the dash and windshield of the car would add in clutter.


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Oct 31, 2010 14:01 |  #14

I like your sad friend just as he is in the original! It's nice and I think the composition is just fine.


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