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Nov 01, 2010 15:49 |  #1

I have never done a reflection image as such before, so could you please advice me on I could have executed it better? And also please critique as well.

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Nov 01, 2010 17:32 |  #2

Very nice, well executed, only thing i'd say is getting some more of dublins more obvious landmarks in frame would make a nice addition. Where was this taken, the courts behind you?

One more point to nit pick over is the sky looks slightly over-exposed, but its not taking away too much from the picture




  
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Nov 01, 2010 17:46 |  #3

capri_stylee wrote in post #11206627 (external link)
Very nice, well executed, only thing i'd say is getting some more of dublins more obvious landmarks in frame would make a nice addition. Where was this taken, the courts behind you?

One more point to nit pick over is the sky looks slightly over-exposed, but its not taking away too much from the picture


No this was taken not so far from templebar, the four courts I presume you mean is in the far distance, the building with the round roof top.

Thank you for your comment, I appreciate it. :)




  
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Nov 01, 2010 19:17 |  #4

The exposure doesn't bother me too much, but the picture does seem to be leaning to the right just a bit. Of course, my eyes could be deceiving me.


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Nov 01, 2010 19:33 |  #5

Didn't notice that till it was pointed out,, can see what your getting at, still think its a great image though.

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Nov 01, 2010 20:29 |  #6

I shot this at f10, iso 200 at 1/50 sec. I used a sigma 10-20mm f4-5.6 and this was shot at 13mm. I have a canon 500D :)

I have noticed it alright, I will fix it later. Cheers

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Nov 01, 2010 20:44 |  #7

I straightened it a little bit and I also recovered the sky using layers in pshop , as I agree that the sky was a bit overexposed. I also fixed CA cause there was a lot on the rooftops and went for a more dramatic colour effect overall. I much prefer this image now, the way it is....

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Nov 01, 2010 21:03 |  #8

Works a bit better imho, nice to see a bit of red coming through in the sky and reflected, rotation barely noticeable but all comes together well. Find myself looking at the buildings rather than the sky holding all my attention. It makes dublin look nice, and thats never easy :lol:




  
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Nov 01, 2010 21:04 |  #9

Ever played with Topaz Adjust? It can really make this shot pop. You don't have image editing permissions enabled or I would post an example.


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Nov 01, 2010 21:06 |  #10

Woolburr wrote in post #11207871 (external link)
Ever played with Topaz Adjust? It can really make this shot pop. You don't have image editing permissions enabled or I would post an example.

Explain, is this a pshop addon....?




  
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Nov 01, 2010 21:07 |  #11

Yes....Topaz makes a variety of plug-ins for PS.


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Nov 01, 2010 21:09 |  #12

capri_stylee wrote in post #11207866 (external link)
Works a bit better imho, nice to see a bit of red coming through in the sky and reflected, rotation barely noticeable but all comes together well. Find myself looking at the buildings rather than the sky holding all my attention. It makes dublin look nice, and thats never easy :lol:

Hahaha, I know what you mean.. If only we had the bleeding weather.




  
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Nov 01, 2010 21:10 |  #13

Woolburr wrote in post #11207895 (external link)
Yes....Topaz makes a variety of plug-ins for PS.


I will look into that. Cheers for your help, I appreciate it.




  
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Nov 01, 2010 21:15 |  #14

Nice picture. The clouds and their corresponding reflection remind me of a fish. For some useful critique I would like to see it at a more "golden hour", but this is pretty nice as is.


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Nov 02, 2010 01:47 |  #15

you should post your unedited image to see the changes you made

I like the edited version though


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