Like what was posted in the comments section of the video - I don't understand the girl, and also the lighting is a little 'average' for the situation. Would have like to see a bit more of a dramatic element there. Besides that, my other C&C is that the guys in the car were kindah unbelievable in their reaction to the M5. Also, was that a bike on the roof? Maybe an American thing that I don't understand, but why?
Besides that it looks good! The editing is pretty tight and the details filming (especially the exhaust) was very class. Looking forward to the full film
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